Review:
The Pyramid Waltz, by Barbara Ann Wright
| Series: |
Katya and Starbride #1 |
| Publisher: |
Bold Strokes |
| Copyright: |
September 2012 |
| ISBN: |
1-60282-792-3 |
| Format: |
Kindle |
| Pages: |
264 |
Princess Katya Nar Umbriel is publicly a bored, womanizing, and difficult
daughter to the rulers of Farraday. It's all an act, though, with the
full knowledge of her parents. As the second child, she's the leader of
the Order of Vestra: the equivalent of the Secret Service, devoted to
protecting the royal family and, by extension, the kingdom, particularly
against magical attacks.
Starbride is new to court and entirely out of place. From a northern
neighboring country, and far more comfortable in practical clothing than
the frilled court dresses that her mother wants her to wear, she has been
sent to court to make contacts. Her people are getting the bad side of
various trade contracts and desperately need some political maneuvering
space of their own. Starbride's best hope for this is to study law in the
palace library when she can manage to avoid the other courtiers. But then
she and Katya stumble across each other, outside of the roles they're
playing, and might have an opportunity for a deeper connection. One that
neither of them want to entangle in their personal worries.
This is the last of a set of books I picked up while looking for lesbian
romance with fantasy or science fiction elements. On the romance front,
it's one of the better entries in that set. Both Katya and Starbride are
likeable, in large part due to their mutual exasperation with the
trappings of the court. (Making the protagonists more serious,
thoughtful, and intelligent than the surrounding characters is an old
trick, but it works.) Wright has a good ear for banter, particularly the
kind when two people of good will are carefully feeling each other out.
And despite Katya's need to keep a deep secret from Starbride for some of
the book,
The Pyramid Waltz mostly avoids irritating communication
failures as a plot driver.
The fantasy portion and the plot drivers, alas, are weaker. The world
building is not exactly bad, but it's just not that interesting. There
are a couple of moderately good ideas, in the form of pyramid magic and
secret (and dangerous) magical powers that run in the royal family, but
they're not well-developed. Pyramid magic turns out to look much like any
other generic fantasy magic system, with training scenes that could have
come from a Valdemar or Wheel of Time novel (and without as much dramatic
tension). And the royal family's secret, while better-developed and
integral to the plot, still felt rather generic and one-sided.
Maybe that's something Wright develops better in future novels in this
series, but that was another problem: the ending of
The Pyramid
Waltz was rather weak. Partly, I think, this is because the cast is too
large and not well-developed. I cared about Katya and Starbird, and to a
lesser extent their servants and one of the Order members. (Wright has a
moderately interesting bit of worldbuilding about how servants work in
Starbride's culture, which I wish we'd seen more of.) But there are a
bunch of other Order of Vesta members, Katya's family, and various other
bits of history and hinted world views, none of which seemed to get much
depth. The ending climax involved a lot of revelations and twists that
primarily concerned characters I didn't care about. It lost something in
the process.
This book is clearly set up for a sequel. There is an ending, but it's
not entirely satisfying. Unfortunately, despite liking Katya and Starbird
a lot, the rest of the story wasn't compelling enough to make me want to
buy it, particularly since the series apparently goes through another
three books before reaching a real ending.
I enjoyed parts of this book, particularly Katya and Starbird feeling each
other out and discovering similarities in their outlook. Katya teasing
Starbird, and Starbird teasing herself, over her mother's choice of her
clothing was probably the best part. It's not bad for what it's trying to
do, but I think it's a bit too generic and not satisfying enough to really
recommend.
Followed by
For Want of a Fiend.
Rating: 6 out of 10