John Goerzen: Review: Shmoop s Coverage of Homer s Iliad
I read The Iliad recently; see my review of it here.
This article isn t about The Iliad, but about Shmoop s coverage of it.
I have never been a person who puts much stock on study guides before, and my own prejudice is that they have probably earned their reputation as useful for little more than a tool to help students pass exams without reading the material. However, I felt rather unequal to reading The Iliad; after all, it has been many years since I had been exposed to Greek mythology, and even then it was very brief. I had remembered from Amazon s blog that they are offering some of the classics with a Shmoop study guide built in. I figured the $2.39 would be worth it. But I m not sure it was.
The resulting ebook has two sections: the main text, and the Shmoop overview. The overview contains essentially the information available for free on their site. This information is pretty good. It has some overviews of the entire book, plus summaries of each chapter. They helpfully provide the backstory in the chapter summaries, so I know why certain gods are on the side of the Trojans and the others on the side of the Achaeans. It helped me figure out the point to some of the actions described on the text. These are linked to at the beginning of each book (chapter) of the Iliad, which was a bit inconvenient because I prefer to read them after reading the main text. Nevertheless, it wasn t a big problem.
The summaries were written colloquially, sometimes too much so. I grinned as the less grabbin , more stabbin summary of the Achaeans being told to salvage armor from the dead later and keep fighting now. I cringed as no way Jose , and rolled my eyes as it described how one of the heroes got owned . That would have been less clear than the original for many.
I would probably have given the Shmoop edition 4 or 5 stars on Amazon were it not for numerous boneheaded mistakes they made.
The commentary uses one translation (Lattimore), while the included text uses a different one (Butler). That s bad enough, but it gets worse: Lattimore uses the Greek names for the gods and heroes, while Butler uses the Roman ones. So you can be reading through the text, learning about Jove, Ulysses, Juno, and Mars. But the commentary refers instead to Zeus, Odysseus, Hera, and Ares. Now, some might have memorized the Greek and Roman names for everyone, but then such people probably aren t wanting a study guide. I finally had to print out a page to help me understand the study guide. That is terrible, and completely inexcusable. They should have used the same translation for the text as the commentary, or at least have provided parenthetical notes throughout the commentary.
Next, they really did a poor job of the main text itself. They have apparently grabbed the Butler ASCII text from Project Gutenberg, and cut and pasted it into some editor. I say this because each line renders as a paragraph; that is, the text doesn t reflow to fit the screen as every single other book does. Worse, it s too wide for the Kindle. So you get one line full width, the next only half as wide as the display (some of the first having wrapped), then the next full width again, on down. Butler is a prose, not a poetic, translation, so this is pointless. Moreover, the line endings are exactly where they are at Project Gutenberg.
So, what we have here is that somebody at Shmoop cut and pasted from their own website and Project Gutenberg, and nobody bothered to check if the resulting product was crap. At least with the new Kindle firmware you can read in landscape mode to prevent most of the lines from wrapping. Still, I m very annoyed at this.
There are other flaws. They highlighted some passages in the text. Clicking on them goes to some commentary about it. OK, fine. But why are some passages highlighted in the text, and some mentioned in the chapter summary? There seemed no rhyme or reason. The highlighted passages commentary was iffy in quality. Sometimes it was useful, and sometimes it asked a question of the sort I might expect in a jr. high English question When has pride helped you in your life? or some such. Worse, not all of the highlights linked to the correct place, and they also suffered from the Greek/Roman name issue.
In all, Shmoop has helped me understand The Iliad and place it in context. But they need to spend a lot more effort on copyediting. Even a couple of hours of someone actually looking at their Kindle product on an actual Kindle would have immediately shown these problems. They could have made a far better product with a few hours more effort.
Five years ago I spent an hour wandering around a large department store looking to buy a kettle & a set of bathroom scales. Much to the amusement of the woman I was shopping with I spent a very long time trying to find the cheapest available set of scales. (We're talking at least 20 minutes, due to the nature of the store and the crowds.)
Once I'd selected the cheapest possible set of bathroom scales we walked over to the kitchen section of the store. I glanced over all the available kettles and picked up the one that looked the nicest (in terms of size, shape, and handle design) with no regard for the price at all.
Why? A set of bathroom scales I use maybe twice a year. A kettle I use in excess of ten times a day. Something you use that often should be right. Even if over time you take it for granted and forget about it. (FWIW the scales were 6.50 and the kettle cost me 39.95 - John Lewis 15/03/2005 - I kept the reciept!)
I'll haggle and quibble over prices for a lot of things, trying to ensure that I don't pay too much. But there are items which are worth paying for (and I don't just mean that "expensive == good" idea some people seem to have). On that basis I'll think nothing of paying 150 for a pair of shoes for example, even though I'll go out of my way to save 5- 10 on a DVD player. Because shoes are important, used very very often, and DVD players just aren't.
(ObReference: I have one pair of shoes. I have five pairs of boots. I might pretend I don't but I also have a pair of sandals. Sshhh it'll be our little secret. ;)
Anyway today my kettle broke. I had to buy a new one at short notice. I did so and the replacement is obviously more advanced. It boils quickly and quietly which is technically an advangtage but in practise is actually a drawback.
Generally speaking I'll fill the kettle, turn it on, then wander away. I'll only return to the kitchen to make my delicous beverage when I hear the "click" signaling that the kettle's job is done. This new one? From outside the kitchen I cannot hear it at all...
In conclusion: Technology and progress is all around us. Sometimes a technical step forward "being quiet" is a bad thing.
In other news I'm fighting with IPv6 & a head cold. Both suck.
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5 years ago I founded my own company
With the help of a couple of friends, we ve put a 4.5T RAID-5 machine on our network and I m trying to figure out how to share the storage with the rest of the hosts. In the past, I have used NFS and CIFS/Samba to provide access to remote hosts. This has generally worked okay so long as the server stays online.
I don t know if the results are going to be much different, but I am now trying a different approach. I plan to run an iSCSI server, and I ve already configured AoE (ATA over Ethernet). I ve exported a block device on the network segment and mounted it on a remote host. This was pretty easy to configure. There is a bit of documentation on the internet already, but I ll give another quick overview.
I gave the storage server the unoriginal name san0 . This host is running debian lenny. I am testing the configuration from my debian sid development host, which has the similarly unoriginal name dev0 . So, think server when you see san0 and client when you see dev0 .
I assume that you ve already got an LVM volume group set up. Mine is called vg0 . Correct the following examples to account for any differences. You can use disk partitions instead of LVM logical volumes.
Forgetting that the product named Internet Explorer is from a certain Redmond company, and thus has to promote other products and services of the same company, I typed in a search term straight into the address bar in an IE6 window.
On the train to my parents' house for Christmas I finished up a wild run
through the book
The book is a collection of interviews with 15 great programmers of our time,
starting with Jamie Zawinsky and ending with Donald Knuth. It's written in an
interview style each interview starts with a brief introduction to the
person being interviewed, summarizing what the person is known for and what he
or she has accomplished and a few of the highlights of the interview, and then
a transcript of the interview follows, with the author/editor, Peter Siebel,
will saying something or asking a question, and the interviewee responding. I
was skeptical about this format at first because I feel like it can be an easy
way out of good editing and make the reader have to do the work of the editor,
but on finishing I think that Siebel uses the format to his advantage in this
case.
For one, the speech format allows the reader to really form a picture of how
the person being interviewed speaks and would act in a conversation. Jamie is
somewhat bitter and pretty informal. Brad Fitzpatrick is flippant and
energetic, his speech littered with profanity and colloquialisms. Others seem
more stately and verbose Joe Armstrong's responses can go on for a page or
more. In this way, not only do readers learn something about what these greats
have learned about programming, but we also feel a bit more like we've met or
know them, and can connect to them more as people.
I always have this problem where I want to read computer books, but often
computer books seem inextricably tied to the computer, so there's this dynamic
of reading a bit and then wanting to get on a machine and try something out,
write some code, play around especially with books focused on a specific
language. Coders at Work retains some of this computer-book dynamic in that I
constantly encountered things that I want to investigate or play around with
more: Erlang, OCaml, various papers and essays, Knuth's literate programs, and
books such as Higher Order Perl and others. Siebel makes a point to ask each
person what her short-list of books and papers programmers should read are, so
this book is a great source of pointers to other reading material. Unlike a
more specific book, however, keeping a list in a notebook was enough to settle
the mind to read away-from-a-computer for chapters at a time.
It's obvious that despite the interview format, Siebel has done some serious
editing. None of the prose is boring to read, and I can't imagine that the text
is a straight transcript of how the interviews went. He also has arranged the
interviews in an order such that different interviews play off each other. In
Branden Eich's interview, for example, he disparages the book
Design Patterns:
I recently tried to improve my way to interact with people by mail, in
my free software work. Particularly, my intent is to be "better" in
using other people names and specific politeness rules.
As many of my readers may guess, being involved in
internationalization means interacting with people of different
cultures.
And, when it comes at names, this is just a nightmare..:-)
Most so-called "westerners" (western of what, by the way?) are used to
the common tradition we share to use people's "first" name....at
first...followed by what is most often the "family" name (the one we
usually get from our parents).
As a consequence, it is fairly easy for me to guess that, interacting
with someone named "Barack Obama", I can use "Dear Barack" if I'm in
position to use his first name and "Mr Obama" if I need to show some
respect distance whatever.
Also, as most "western" names are quite familiar in my ears
(international culture, blah blah), I can easily guess what is a first
name and what is a family name (though, here, "Barack" is probably not
the best example). Gender may become a little bit trickier in several
cases, but, thankfully, in English, "Dear" does not change with gender
(but the third person does whic sometimes leads to problems).
The problem arises when interacting with many other culturally
different people such as my friends in Japan, China, India, Africa,
etc. Here, dammit, the habits might vary a lot and things get
harder.
Should I call my friend "Kenshi Muto" as "Dear Kenshi",
"Kenshi-san", "Muto-san" or whatever? From my readings, I see that
most Japanese people do put their family name at first. So, I should
then call him "Dear Muto" if I'm very close to him (oh, maybe it's
'her', by the way, who knows?)...or maybe "Kenshi-sensei" because he
(oh...or she) is a respected figure in the Japanese FLOSS
community...or whatever. Damn!
Thankfully, I know Kenshi for years, we're good friends and I know
that he's using the "western" way to write his name. I also know he's
a man : after 5 or 6 Debconfs, you know everything about people!
But, of course, it becomes harder when it comes at people I never had
contacts before.....and I don't want to appear as impolite, or silly
so, then we jump into my daily "nightmare". Using Wikipedia for hints
about
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